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Punksmudge

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:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

the work is not original, you should not put the soft brush to smudge it, the character was well cast and it shows in her hair.
the work has no depth and therefore has no impact.
the lights do not exist in this work and the color is not the best, try to maintain the quality in the font that is sinning.
the composition and direction of the smudge is monotonous and annoying, and the character too big for this size, try to shrink the character and give him a better position.
Follow the video tutorial by eddy pochy on youtube for more techic smudge.
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